Hi I am a year seven at Havelock North Intermediate. I am in room 10 and my teacher is Miss O'Brien
Wednesday, 22 February 2017
Swimming Sports
Cold, I don't want to go in but my friend pulls me into the water. Wet hair drips, damp and cold, down my back. Shivering so get out only to be pushed back in. Finally out and dress it was a good swimming sports.
I'm glad your friend pulled you in. Remember you have a world wide audience who can read your blog. It is also a place to showcase your learning, successes and achievements. Please aim to include more detail in future posts. Think about who, when, where, why, what and how. What were you feeling? What were you proud of? What challenged you out of your comfort zone. As a year 7 learner, I am certain you can include more detail in your posts. Miss O'B
I'm glad your friend pulled you in. Remember you have a world wide audience who can read your blog. It is also a place to showcase your learning, successes and achievements. Please aim to include more detail in future posts. Think about who, when, where, why, what and how. What were you feeling? What were you proud of? What challenged you out of your comfort zone. As a year 7 learner, I am certain you can include more detail in your posts. Miss O'B
ReplyDeleteI will try my best to add more detail in my work. Like who, how, what, why.
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